{"id":18950,"date":"2025-02-04T20:46:09","date_gmt":"2025-02-05T03:46:09","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/?p=18950"},"modified":"2025-02-04T20:49:02","modified_gmt":"2025-02-05T03:49:02","slug":"revisiting-an-old-manuscript-iwsg","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/?p=18950","title":{"rendered":"Revisiting An Old Manuscript #IWSG"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/03\/Insecure.jpg?ssl=1\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-medium wp-image-2239\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/03\/Insecure.jpg?resize=300%2C295&#038;ssl=1\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"295\" srcset=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/03\/Insecure.jpg?resize=300%2C295&amp;ssl=1 300w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/03\/Insecure.jpg?resize=768%2C756&amp;ssl=1 768w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/03\/Insecure.jpg?resize=355%2C350&amp;ssl=1 355w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/03\/Insecure.jpg?resize=150%2C148&amp;ssl=1 150w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/03\/Insecure.jpg?w=932&amp;ssl=1 932w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Insecure Writer\u2019s Support Group (IWSG) is enjoying its monthly blog-fest invented by Alex J. Cavanaugh. IWSG is a safe haven for insecure writers of all kinds.<\/p>\n<p>The awesome co-hosts for our February 5th posting of the IWSG are: Joylene Nowell Butler, Louise Barbour, and Tyrean Martinson!<\/p>\n<h3><strong>QUESTION:<\/strong>\u00a0Is there a story or book you\u2019ve written you want to\/wish you could go back and change?<\/h3>\n<h4>I&#8217;ve done this!<\/h4>\n<p>The first draft of The Edwards Investigations was written over a decade ago. Back then, it was called The Edwards Agency. I knew it held promise, but it just wasn&#8217;t there. I attempted several times to revise it, and I even started a second book, but I never made a commitment to the changes.<\/p>\n<p>And I knew what the problem was. The book was &#8216;dated&#8217; but wasn&#8217;t old enough to be historical. It just felt like it was something I&#8217;d pulled out of a box and presented to the world.<\/p>\n<p>But it bugged me. I&#8217;d fallen in love with the characters, and didn&#8217;t want to abandon them.<\/p>\n<h4>\u00a0So, I started over.<\/h4>\n<p>First thing I did was to pinpoint what years I wanted the book to be set in. That helped define the settings. I didn&#8217;t even open the old manuscript, except to verify the main characters&#8217; names. But I didn&#8217;t need to. The story had taken up a permanent residence in the archives of my brain. And stayed there. It became no more than a background for the new plot.<\/p>\n<p>Still, it took me over a year to complete the new and improved product. (Partly due to personal issues I won&#8217;t go into here.) But when I finished it, it came with a sense of accomplishment. I&#8217;d finally done justice to the original premise without replicating it.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/10\/edwards_rimer-cover.png?ssl=1\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-medium wp-image-18140\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/10\/edwards_rimer-cover.png?resize=187%2C300&#038;ssl=1\" alt=\"\" width=\"187\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/10\/edwards_rimer-cover.png?resize=187%2C300&amp;ssl=1 187w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/10\/edwards_rimer-cover.png?resize=637%2C1024&amp;ssl=1 637w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/10\/edwards_rimer-cover.png?resize=218%2C350&amp;ssl=1 218w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/10\/edwards_rimer-cover.png?resize=93%2C150&amp;ssl=1 93w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/10\/edwards_rimer-cover.png?w=750&amp;ssl=1 750w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 187px) 100vw, 187px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Now, I&#8217;m working on a second book in the series. It&#8217;s slow going, but it&#8217;s going to take time to weave together the threads I envision.<\/p>\n<p>That&#8217;s it for me. Hope you&#8217;ll check out some of the other authors who are part of the Insecure Writer&#8217;s Support Group<\/p>\n<p>And as always, please stay safe until the next time.<\/p>\n<p><!-- start LinkyTools script --><script src=\"https:\/\/www.linkytools.com\/basic_linky_include.aspx?id=103850\" type=\"text\/javascript\" ><\/script><!-- end LinkyTools script --><\/p>\n\n\n<hr class=\"wp-block-separator has-alpha-channel-opacity\"\/>\n\n\n\n<p><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Is there a story or book you\u2019ve written you want to\/wish you could go back and change? <a class=\"continue-reading-link\" href=\"https:\/\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/?p=18950\">Continue reading<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":5,"featured_media":18140,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"om_disable_all_campaigns":false,"_monsterinsights_skip_tracking":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_active":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_note":"","_monsterinsights_sitenote_category":0,"_uf_show_specific_survey":0,"_uf_disable_surveys":false,"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":true,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[10],"tags":[443,9,8,48],"class_list":["post-18950","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-iwsg","tag-edwardsinvestigations","tag-iamwriting","tag-iwsg","tag-writing"],"aioseo_notices":[],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/10\/edwards_rimer-cover.png?fit=750%2C1206&ssl=1","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/paJdTo-4VE","jetpack_likes_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/18950","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/5"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=18950"}],"version-history":[{"count":6,"href":"https:\/\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/18950\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":18961,"href":"https:\/\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/18950\/revisions\/18961"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/media\/18140"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=18950"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=18950"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.pjmaclayne.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=18950"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}