The Biggest Don’ts In Writing #OpenBook Blog Hop

January 12, 2025

What is the biggest “don’t” in writing?

What should a writer never do?

There’s a simple answer to this question – don’t give up. If you enjoy writing, keep at it. Even if you are writing only for an audience of one – you – stick with it.

Now that’s out of the way –

Don’t skip the hard stuff. Grammar. Spelling and punctuation. Make sure you are using the right words in a context your reader will understand. And that the words are put together in a rational order. There are people who can break the rules and be successful. William Carlos Williams. Grandma Moses. Lady Gaga. They put a lot of work into their unconventional styles. We may dream about being successful no matter how we write, but the chances of that happening are near zero. Shoot, it’s hard to be recognized even if you follow all the rules.

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Now, if you are writing for a private journal, you can ease up on those rules. But if you want to pass your memories on to other generations, don’t. The language will have changed enough over the years to potentially make reading difficult. (There are sites where people attempt to interpret recipes, letters and historical documents written by long-dead relatives. Fascinating to give it a try yourself.)

Anything else?

There are lots of other rules. Don’t be harsh to other writers. Don’t plagiarize. And another one, more important than the others – be kind.

What advice do the other authors on this hop offer? Find out by following the links below.

As always, until next time, please stay safe

Goal update: I’m just over 27,000 words. I’ve also changed the tentative name of the book, but I’m still not entirely sold on it.

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January 12, 2025

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Columbines and Irises #OpenBook Blog Hop

January 5, 2025

Now that it’s the new year, tell us a favorite holiday memory. (Any holiday!)

There’s over a foot of snow on the ground, and the winter holidays are over.

Every morning for the past week or more, I’ve had to clean off my Jeep before going anywhere. So let’s talk about a special Fourth of July from over a decade ago. (Side note- why does a decade sound like a longer time than 10 years?) Anyway, that year the Fourth of July fell on a Friday, and we decided to make the drive up to the mountains, one of our favorite things to do.

There were several routes we’d take from Cheyenne, WY, most of them going through Walden, CO, then to Fort Collins, and returning to Cheyenne. (Or the other way around.) I made a game of it – how many routes could I find to get to the same places? I jokingly called them my smuggler’s routes. Several of them weren’t available in the winter, when snow covered the mountain passes.

Back to the memory.

That year, we took off early in the day. The round trip took about 4 hours of straight driving. We never drove it straight. There were many possible stops along the way. Perhaps Jelm. Maybe the green house along Route 230, owned by the state of Colorado. Or Cowdrey Reservoir, where we first spotted the flock of yellow-headed blackbirds. Or one of the many small pull-offs along the way.

One of them was where I spotted the first wild columbine I’d ever seen. I’d heard of them, of course, but it was like spotting a legend. Then it became a quest, looking for more along the road. Wildflowers of many shapes, sizes, and colors bloomed everywhere we looked. I don’t know the names of most of them, but the pictures I took that day are backed up in three places.

That same trip, I spotted a field of irises on a side road out of Walden. Not just a few scattered plants here and there, but a wetlands area filled with them. (To consider how unique that was, Walden is in a high desert area – elevation over 8000 ft.)

I don’t remember how long the trip took that day – probably closer to ten hours if you consider the stops for meals and exploring. It wasn’t long enough, but we ran out of daylight.

Feel free to share your favorite memories in the conducts. Other authors will be sharing theirs on their blogs, found in the links below.

As always, please stay safe until the next time.

Goal accountability. (From last week’s blog.) I broke 25000 words and did some basic editing on my WIP. I feel good about it.)

January 5, 2025

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Happy New Years! #OpenBook Blog Hop

December 29, 2025

Happy New Year! Set a goal for yourself and let’s track it through 2026 to see how it’s going.

I’ve said this before – I don’t do New Year’s resolutions.

But I actually have a resolution that has nothing to do with the New Year. I made it when the anthology I took part in was published. (Defending the Moonlight.) I had interrupted writing the second book in the Edwards Investigations series to work on my entry for for the anthology. I really want to get that book completed. And I want to get it done before the start of the book-selling season.

That gives me six months. I’m currently at just over 22,000 words. Getting the first draft done shouldn’t be a problem, God willing and the creeks don’t rise. (We’ve had over 2 feet of snow, freezing rain that accumulated over 1/4 inch of ice, and about 1/2 inch of rain in the past week and a half. My sump pump is hard at work. Another storm is predicted to descend on us on Monday.) With this weather, I should have plenty of time to write.

The time crunch is people to critique.

And edit. And format for publication. And for the various companies to push publish. I can’t control those. Not as much as I’d like.

But I can control figuring out the story. I keep finding bodies to add to the carnage, new parts of the puzzle, and now the pieces are starting to make sense. I’ve already written a chapter that I thought was the first one and now realize belongs closer to the end. I’m not adding those several thousand words in my word count.

So, that’s my goal. Get this book written and as far along in the process as I can get. Yes, my personal goal is to get the book into print by the middle of June, but I won’t count it against myself if that doesn’t happen. I will be unhappy if I don’t have the first draft finished. I’ll keep you updated.

What about the other authors who join the hop this week? What goals do they have? Find out by following the links below.

As always, please stay safe until the next time.

December 29, 2025

Happy New Year! Set a goal for yourself and let’s track it through 2026 to see how it’s going.

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The Joys Of Researching #OpenBook Blog Hop

December 22, 2025

What person/place/thing did you enjoy researching the most?

Much of my research has to do with various types of weaponry.

So many of my books deal with firearms. Harmony Duprie has a revolver, the smallest one she could possibly use and still go damage. My wolf shifters are armed with various types of military style guns. Jake Hennessey didn’t carry a gun, but the law enforcement officials he dealt with did. It was interesting, and I got lots of advice from experts I knew, but it was “temporary” information and nothing I retained.

The research I’ve done for the Edwards Investigations series is different. I’m referencing places I knew and times that I lived through. But I’m not just remembering my personal stories; I’m putting my memories into a historical context, looking at them from a different point of view. It’s fascinating.

But reliving my experience with the dawn of the personal computer era is the most engrossing. I played the original arcade version of pong, and used 5 1/4 floppy discs. I had a camera that used 3 1/2 floppies to store files. My experience with computers started in the days of DOS and stretched all the way to the current domination of Windows. Being able to put that into exact years wasn’t possible without lots of research.

So, it made sense to make the advent of computers part of the movement of the stories.

I can use it exactly as history writes it, or I can smudge the edges as needed. It’s not the main plot point (or is it?)  but it gives readers something to hang their hats on. I can play loose with other areas of the history as long as readers feel comfortable with pieces they experienced. Or they can google something I mention to verify it. (Although cell phones haven’t made an appearance yet.)

Although I build a strong foundation in Book 1, I’m expanding on it for Book 2.  What was the role of the Nuclear Regulatory Commission? When was the last time you heard anything about it? You’ll have to stay tuned, dear reader, to find out.

Let’s find out what other authors have been researching. Just follow the links below.

As always, please stay safe until the next time. And have a good holiday, whichever one you celebrate this time of year.

December 22, 2025

-What person/place/thing did you enjoy researching the most?

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It’s A Winter Wonderland #OpenBook Blog Hop

December 15, 2025

Winter is coming to the northern part of the world. (It’s here!). Do you have any plans, or do you prefer to hide from the cold?

You may know the song – “It’s beginning to look a lot like Christmas.”

Many of the past years, we’ve had a hint of winter before the holidays. An inch of snow here, a skiff of snow there. “I’m Dreaming of a White Christmas” was only a dream. This year, that all turned upside down.

It was only a few short weeks ago when I was trying to save the last of my summer flowers to anticipated nights of near-freezing temperatures. I enjoyed every extra moment I scavenged.

Now, winter has hit hard, and it’s not even officially that season yet. In the past week, we’ve received around three feet of snow, and we’re getting more. I’ve given up trying to keep my sidewalk clean.  It’s time to hibernate.


(That’s my back deck. I estimate two feet of snow on the railings. And it’s still better than the hurricane force winds in Alaska, the floods in Washington and Oregon, and the winds strong enough to tip over semitrucks in Wyoming and Colorado.) 

But that doesn’t mean I will become inactive.

All the housework I ignored in favor of being outside all summer will nag me. Spring cleaning comes early in this house. It’s a natural progression from taking down and putting away Christmas decorations to deciding that deep cleaning is in order. And despite my determination to get caught up on my reading list, somehow, that never happens.

But perhaps I’ll make more progress on my work-in-progress, book 2 in the Edwards Investigations. It was coming along well until I stopped to send out Christmas cards. Now, it’s just nagging me, taunting me. I should give it some well-deserved attention tonight after I finish this post, while I sip  on a cup of peppermint tea.

What about you? Do you have any winter plans? Check the links below to see what other authors are up to.

And, as always, please stay safe until next time.

December 15, 2025

Winter is coming to the northern part of the world. (It’s here!). Do you have any plans, or do you prefer to hide from the cold?

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To Be Or Not to Be #Open Book Blog Hop

December 8, 2025

Do you call yourself more of a philosopher or entertainer?

That’s a good question. One I’ve never considered.

But I’m pretty sure “the world” labels me as an entertainer. I can turn a simple incident into a long story. Someday, let me tell you about the house we toured that had a hole in the middle of the living room floor. Although I never came up with a logical reason for that “feature.” The home wasn’t old enough to be part of the Underground Railroad or whiskey running, although the idea of pot smuggling crossed my mind.

For the most part, my Harmony books were written to amuse the reader. There were occasions when I touched on more serious topics, but my primary intent was to have fun. I tried to sneak in the heavy bits where the reader wouldn’t stop to think about the message, that maybe it would hit them later. Or maybe it would never cross their mind and that’s okay too.

My wolf books tackle more serious topics.

Patriarchy. Jealousy. Breaking barriers. The topics are built into the stories, woven into the adventures. I try to present the discussion from both sides, to allow the reader to decide which side they agree with, while making it clear why the character involved chose the one they did.

That still doesn’t make me a philosopher. 

Which, at heart, I am. But I don’t like to force my beliefs on others. If a topic comes up in discussion, I’ll gladly give my input. I may temper my words if I feel like the others aren’t open to hearing my ideas. But I have lots of ideas, and they have changed and refined over the years. I’m still learning new things.

What about the other authors on this hop? Philosopher or entertainer? Find out by following the links below.

As always, until next time, please stay safe.

December 8, 2025

Do you call yourself more of a philosopher or entertainer?

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All It Takes Is A Little Poke #OpenBook Blog Hop

December 1, 2025

Name a distraction that drives you mad when trying to work.

It’s too easy to do something besides write, even when I’m at my desk.

And it’s far too simple to allow things to get in the way of being productive when I’m sitting at the computer. Facebook reels can be addictive, as well as YouTube shorts. At least I don’t spend a lot of time on Instagram.

But things as simple as housekeeping can be a distraction. No matter how many things I get done, I can always add to that list. And then there are the evergreens. I’ve had removing the fire detector in my little travel trailer on the list for over six months. And the dream of putting a lawn chair and table in the backyard (as far from the house as the wi-fi reaches.) has been floating around the back of my brain for close to three years.

But the hardest thing to overcome is the location of my desk. There’s no privacy. I can shut out a lot of noise with my headphones, but I can’t stop someone from coming and tapping me on the shoulder or the grandkids looking for help with their homework.

So, you could say that life is the biggest distraction. It’s hard to be mad at that.

What’s distracting the other authors on this hop? Find out by following the links below.

And, as always, please stay safe until the next time.

December 1, 2025

Name a distraction that drives you mad when trying to work. 

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Building A World #OpenBook Blog Hop

November 24, 2025

What is one of your favorite settings from your books?

I built an entire small town over the course of my Harmony Duprie mysteries and Jake Hennessey books.

It happened in small moments, and momentary glimpses into people’s lives.

*****

Oak Grove was one of those “rust belt” cities, fallen on hard times when the steel mills moved overseas. When the jobs disappeared, so did half of the population. The downtown area had more than its share of empty storefronts, and the mall near the edge of town wasn’t full. Not being a fan of the big box stores, my choices were limited.

*****

The Dairy Barn felt like a blast from the 60s, a teenage hangout from a TV show. Faded red vinyl on the seats of the booths, servers in short-sleeve shirts with white collars, and a jukebox in the corner. Jake imagined it playing music from Woodstock instead of recent pop songs.

*****

Mabel had volunteered for the library for fifty-some years. She was as much of a fixture as the bookshelves.

“The library is haunted? Nobody ever mentioned it when I worked here.”

Janine leaned across the table and lowered her voice. “That’s what she claims. She said back in the 1920’s, shortly after the library opened, a man who taught English at the local high school dated one of the librarians. According to the story, she broke off the relationship after a few dates. He tried to win her back, but she didn’t want anything to do with him. In fact, she started seeing the owner of Mitchell’s department store. According to Mabel, the teacher committed suicide. Hung himself off the second floor railing the same day as the librarian and the businessman got married”

*****.

Wednesday night was girls’ night out at our hang-out of choice, the Pink Flamingo. The Flamingo is about a quarter restaurant, three-fourths bar, and has been our favorite spot since high school. The plastic birds it took its name from have faded to an almost white color from exposure to the sunshine through the front windows, but the owner has never replaced them. Not much has changed in ten years, except we no longer sit up front in the restaurant section with its beige upholstery and bright lighting. We’ve graduated to the middle section where most of the seating is barstools or wooden chairs at small tables, and only a few booths line one wall and lighting is kept to a minimum. The back is reserved for pool players and their buddies.

*****

A few years back, Pete Zamora had been one of the rare male high school volunteers at the library. When I first started working there, I’d been closest in age to the high-schoolers and became their unofficial liaison. Sure, he signed up because he had a crush on a girl who volunteered, but that didn’t stop him from pitching in with the best of them. I hadn’t seen him around lately, but the rumor mill reported his hiring by the fire department.

There were several locations I kept coming back to.

The local library where Harmony had worked and where she did most of her research. The remodeled Victorian where she rented the third floor. The Aldridge house, the house Jake had bought and lost back to the bank when he was in prison. That house that was the center of so much of the action in the series. Where she found Jake hiding out during a snowstorm. Where she was wined and dined by Jake’s competition. And where she introduced Eli to the resident ghost. 

*****

I caught a flicker of movement in a second-story window as I pulled up to the Aldridge house. The last rays of the setting sun lit the exterior, making the fading and peeling white paint look pale pink. Once the weather warmed up, I would start the job of returning the wooden siding to its original deep blue color.

*****

I called the last room, with a window facing the main street, the ghost’s room. I’d never seen the ghost, but I’d heard it plenty of times. Some days when I pulled up to the house, I saw the curtains in this window move, despite all the repairs. I’d left the thin and faded curtains up, so the ghost would feel safe.

*****

“And I won’t be moving in. I’ll come over for meetings and stay when you’re in town, but otherwise, I’ll keep my place. That way I don’t become part of the furniture or spend my nights listening to the ghost in the walls.” Or end up homeless if we broke up.

“We have ghosts?”

Out of all the things I’d mentioned, he wanted to talk about the ghost?

“I’ve never seen it, but I hear it. I figured it was mice in the walls at first, but after we had the exterminator go through the entire house, the noises still happened. It quiets down when the house has people in it. It likes company.”

“You’re not the type to believe in ghosts.”

I wasn’t. “Spend a few nights here by yourself, then tell me what you think.”

All selections are from various books in the Harmony Duprie series.

*****

I hadn’t planned it that way, but that old house became the centerpiece of the series. (Including it being set on fire in one book.) 

What settings have our other authors shared? The links below will lead you to the magic.

As always, please stay safe until the next time.

November 24, 2025

What is one of your favorite settings from your books?

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What’s On The Airwaves #OpenBook Blog Hop

November 17, 2025

Recommend music to the other authors to check out that may not be mainstream to them.

I’m a classic rock fan.

It makes sense, as that was the music I listened to growing up. But my focus was anything that came out of the singer-songwriters. John Denver, Judy Collins, Johnny Cash, Buffy St. Marie. Of course, that bled in one direction into country-western and the other into rock. Buffy St Marie led me into exploring Native American music.

But I’ve found some other music and musicians that I’ve fallen in love with. First one is Celtic music. Not the Americanized/commercial stuff, but the “real” traditional song. One example is Seo Linn. I may not know the language, but the music stirs my soul. Seo Linn – Óró Sé do Bheatha Bhaile

Today’s heavy metal is not my choice for listening, but there are exceptions. Disturbed did a cover of The Sounds of Silence, which can bring me to tears. I’ve tried listening to more of their songs, but I’m not a convert. Sounds of Silence

Let’s switch to the opposite direction. Where I live is technically in the Appalachians (the northern part) but it’s never seemed like part of it to me. But many musicians owe their beginnings to music from the area of the Appalachian mountains in Kentucky, Tennessee, and West Virginia. (Which, in turn, has roots in Irish folk music.) Johnny Cash and Dolly Parton are prime examples of popular musicians who were influenced by traditional folk songs. Ola Belle Reed was one of the old-time singers whose music has been preserved.  Ola Belle Reed

Two more before I wrap this up.

I love how Native American music has been transformed into protest songs. Here’s a song from the Standing Rock confrontation of the mid-2010s over an oil pipeline being built over a vulnerable river. Standing Rock

Here’s another one, based on the history of Anna Mae Aquash, a Native American activist from the 1960s-70s. Anna Mae

I know that’s a wide scattering of songs and musical types, but I’m always open to new influences. So I’m really looking forward to listening to what my fellow authors are sharing. Just check out the links below.

As always, until next time, please stay safe.

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Happy Holidays! #OpenBook Blog Hop

 

Nov 10, 2025

Which is your favorite holiday and why?

Happy Holidays!

I’m not sure I can pick a favorite holiday. What I can do is pick one favorite way to celebrate. 

Fireworks.

It doesn’t matter the time of year. They are traditional for the Fourth of July in the United States, but are common for other holidays as well. I love the multi-colored sparkles that light the sky and the booms and hisses that fill the air. Sure, they aren’t as common for the winter holidays, (except for New Year’s) but as long as it’s warm to stay outside, they can be enjoyed any time of year.

If I had to pick a holiday, it would be Christmas. Not so much for myself, but for the grandkids. But I love decorating my house and putting up as many lights as I can find a place for. The way they brighten the dark nights and create a fairyland is worth the effort. And if there happens to be a bit of snow to enhance the glow, even better. (We’re getting our first snowfall of the season as I write this.)

Find out what the other authors on this hop have picked as their favorite holiday by following the links below. And, as always, please stay safe until next time.

By the way, watch this space for information on the release of the anthology, Defending the Moonlight, I am part of. The participating authors are raising money for K9s for Vets.

 

Nov 10, 2025

Which is your favorite holiday and why?

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